10/26

I think I finally hammered out the end of the main subplot so it's not as cheesy. I don't need a lot of drama there; I just need understanding.

10/11

I got a two-page treatment of my screenplay written. I came up with a working title, "The Choice Declined". And I decided I need to clean up the ending. It's a little cluttered and, frankly, cliche. Not sure how I'll have father and daughter patch things up yet, but I'm sure they will.

10/9

Worked a little on my comparative timelines, but realized my civilizations aren't old enough to be the real powerhouses I want. Time to look for another area to make my cradle of civilization.

10/5

Even with a splitting sinus headache, I managed to work a little on my world building. A rough sense of where my big three ancient civilizations lived will let me create their mythologies so I can start naming things.

I hate naming things.